Seems like a lot of authors over on FimFiction are rewriting their stories lately. I don’t really have anything against this in principle… Okay, that’s a bit of a fib. I’m of the ‘write the next thing’ school of thought. But in this case I see several authors rewriting fairly long stories that will probably take a while. All I can think of is that I want them to be putting that effort into writing their next big story. Anyone else notice rewriting being more common recently, or is it just me?
And while I’m complaining about authors not finishing their next big stories fast enough… I want the sequel to It’s a Dangerous Business, Going Out Your Door already!
Light and silly. Just what I needed after First Light Of Dawn. The best part of this story is definitely the part at the very end when they are talking about rap sheets.
Eh, found this lackluster. Writing isn’t really all that bad. It’s just kind of, well, kind of there. Had one good line (“Oh Trixie, you do not need to be remotely intelligent to run a nation. It is quite easy.”. Other than that, I think ‘eh’ sums up my reaction.
I wanted this to be longer. This could be extended into a good adventure and/or romance story. Plus I wanted to know how you could have Princess Twilight Sparkle pre-dating Rarity. It does have something of a fairy tale feel to it, so it worked. I’d recommend it.