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Pony Stories 367

25 Mar

Hmm… Need to start scheduling these again. Maybe just do a whole week of reviews since I’ve got enough of them at this point.

  • Ice Crystals by The DJ Rainbow Dash
  • Mate in Five Moves by Karrakaz
  • A Simple Game by Albert Manhattan
  • The Closet by Jay-The-Brony

Ice Crystals by The DJ Rainbow Dash

Better than the last one, but still somewhat typical. Moment in a already going relationship. Wasn’t exactly what I expected either. Never really addresses Rarity’s fear of heights, though indicates that she has it.

Mate in Five Moves by Karrakaz

Sweet romance story. I have a hard time picturing Pinkie Pie in a romantic relationship, but this one pulled it off. Fairly simple, but sincere and avoids the worst pitfalls shipping stories have.

A Simple Game by Albert Manhattan

Another simple, but sincere one. Just a bit of family bonding between Twilight and Spike. An enjoyable bit of slice of life fluff.

The Closet by Jay-The-Brony

Fun, though the writing is a bit rough. The author needs to work a bit more on showing. Most of it was the narration telling the reader this or that. Still, fun little scene.

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2 Comments

Posted by on March 25, 2015 in Ponies, Reading 2015, Reviews

 

2 responses to “Pony Stories 367

  1. Pascoite Fics

    March 26, 2015 at 5:42 pm

    fyi, this post isn’t listed under the “pony” category.

     
    • Griffin

      March 26, 2015 at 8:37 pm

      *points behind you* What in the world is that?!

      *quickly puts in categories while your head is turned*

       

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