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Pony Stories 387

17 Apr

Ha! My rereading fanfic has least to me finding that one single line I’ve been trying to remember for months now. Woohoo. It was in Tea Time With Alicorn.

Big Master Review List stats: Authors: [2173], Stories [4963], Total Reviews: [7864]

The Model Caretaker by zyr1987

It gets points for the pairing, but the writing was just too unpolished for me. Plus it used the word lesbimare, which just sounds silly. Which is an accomplishment when the word it is competing with is fillyfooler, a fairly silly word itself.

Fireworks for a Princess by Silent Strider

I suspect this was a casualty of the ebooks stripping all formatting from stories. It was done in letter and journal format, but lack of any kind of horizontal lines or page breaks, most of them kind of ran into each other. As for the story itself, it wasn’t bad. Pacing was a little rushed, and the author doesn’t quite have the letter format down completely, but despite all that it was a pleasant read.

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2 Comments

Posted by on April 17, 2015 in Ponies, Reading 2015, Reviews

 

2 responses to “Pony Stories 387

  1. Present Perfect

    April 18, 2015 at 8:06 am

    What line was it? :O

     
    • Griffin

      April 18, 2015 at 11:00 am

      Well, technically it’s a whole exchange. But, basically this one: “Every pegasus develops their own routine in flight school.”
      It’s just been bugging me because I could remember it so clearly, yet my brain couldn’t recall where I read it.

       

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