Another random pony fan fiction idea. To put on the pile of things I’ll never write. Since I don’t
ever often write pony fan fiction. A immortal outliving everypony story that’s Rarity missing Spike. Just a switch around of what a lot of those stories are.
- The Necromancer’s Ambition by KuroiTsubasaTenshi
- Ordem e Progresso by Chocolate Milk
- Chill by FloydienSlip
Not a bad story. Just a little empty for my tastes. I like fairly dense stories, and this was a fairly light piece. The whole every paragraph and sentence should do multiple things? Not the case here. Pretty sure you could edit this story down to half its length and not actually lose much of the actual story. On the other band it was an easy read had had good characters. So might be a don’t fix if it’s not broken? The writing wasn’t bad, just lacked the substance and complexity I enjoy.
I spent most of this story wanting to smack the main character upside the head. So it passes one test in that I was mad at the character and not the author. It has a conclusion, but not a very satisfying one. I would have liked to see what happens to her after she makes the decision at the end. Her reasoning being just idiotic in my opinion and I suspect she won’t be any happier after it than before. The story isn’t bad, but it is mostly a character study of a character I didn’t like much.
A decent human in Equestria story. Little light on details, but that’s intentional. Ending was… a bit stylistic for me. I wanted to know what happens next. The practical part of my brain just goes “yes, and?” at the big emotional moment that wraps up the story.