RSS

Pony Stories 524

06 Dec

I hope that Rara doesn’t give up the laser popstar thing completely. Obviously something ponies enjoyed and that style of music is something I enjoy. Maybe hire that manager back on just as effects and choreography and make sure he knows he doesn’t get any authority outside of that. Do maybe two different types of events, the flashy popstar stuff and the more from the heart ones. With one song of the other style mixed in.

And here is an amusing bit about reviewing the titles of pony fan fiction. I thought about linking it on the list, but was kind of on the fence about it and then realized that it’s pretty much all negative. Which isn’t bad in itself, but tips the balance towards not including it.

  • In My Life by DeiStar
  • Dear Diary… by Brony4L1fe90

In My Life by DeiStar

Eeeh, it could have been worse. The writing was a bit rough and the story was a bit generic. Could have been an interesting look at Princess Celestia, but the author doesn’t really do anything with it.

Dear Diary… by Brony4L1fe90

Didn’t get past the first chapter of this one. Writing was just too rough. Another example of why new writers get pounded with show don’t tell. Here’s an example from the story, and not nearly the worst.

“Oh…we’re really sorry, Twilight,” Sweetie Belle said as she walked up to her, eyes showing guilt from hurting her bigger sister, Rarity’s, good friend.

Which is a pity, because I was looking for some nice Twilight and Applejack shipping.

Advertisements
 
4 Comments

Posted by on December 6, 2015 in Ponies, Reading 2015, Reviews

 

4 responses to “Pony Stories 524

  1. Pascoite Fics

    December 7, 2015 at 8:32 am

    We’ve gone back in time to post 517! Revisionist history!

    Wait, this is just your take on the season finale. I get it now.

    Clever.

     
    • Griffin

      December 7, 2015 at 9:21 am

      I’m sure I have no clue what you are talking about. The post titles are obviously accurate and correct and have always been accurate and correct.

      Or I title a post and then forget that I moved to a later date and forget to rename it.

       
  2. Pascoite Fics

    December 7, 2015 at 5:35 pm

    Starlight Glimmer got to you, didn’t she?

     
    • Griffin

      December 7, 2015 at 9:22 pm

      Of course not. Why would she have any interest in me? I’m just the same as everyone else…

      Hee.

       

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s