Pony Stories 758

27 Jun

In my re-watch of season 5.. Wait, season 6? Whichever was the one that ended with Starlight, Trixie, Discord, and Thorax becoming the misfit group that saves the world. I could look it up, but lazy. Anyway, I realized during that re-watch that Twilight Sparkle is a terrible influence on other unicorns. She shouldn’t be worried about Starlight Glimmer hanging out with Trixie. Trixie should be worried about Starlight Glimmer hanging out with Twilight Sparkle.

So, Starlight Glimmer was first seen being the somewhat unhinged leader of a village that used cult-conditioning rooms to indoctrinate new ponies. Then we see her trying to break time to get petty revenge that involved changing events and battling an Alicorn. Both of which we see no evidence she uses mind manipulation/control magic. She is defeated and Twilight Sparkle becomes her teacher/warden. It’s only after being with Twilight Sparkle for a bit that she starts breaking out the mind control magic. Whereas we’ve seen Twilight Sparkle resort to mind-control magic before then.

  • Sunspawned by Masterweaver
  • Sunshipped by Masterweaver

Sunspawned by Masterweaver

This was pretty funny and interesting. Had both comedy, character interaction, and drama. All nicely mixed in a compact short story. I’d certainly recommend it but I know it won’t be for everyone.

Sunshipped by Masterweaver

I liked this one even better than the first one. Had a very cool version of reformed Sunset Shimmer and I like the sort of random starts and quick back-and-forth sort of character interactions this had. Plus it merges the story description and chapter titles into the main narrative. Which would be annoying if every story did it, but I really enjoy it as a sometimes treat. There isn’t a whole lot to say about it beyond that. I hope the sequel (third one of the series) gets finished up because it looks like it’ll have an actual story instead of just a scene or two of amusement.



Posted by on June 27, 2017 in Ponies, Reading 2017, Reviews


3 responses to “Pony Stories 758

  1. Present Perfect

    June 27, 2017 at 5:50 pm

    “Reforming” was all part of Starlight’s master plan to mind-control the population of Equestria! It wouldn’t work unless their guard was down! :V

  2. iisawiisaw

    June 28, 2017 at 1:53 pm

    Any reason you didn’t review the first story in the trilogy?

    • Griffin

      June 28, 2017 at 2:01 pm

      Whoops! Because I totally forgot about it. Have read it, just… Well, now I know something to put in the next post!


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